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Many want to become them
Like I do they never have anyone they just have
others and masters many don't understand them they
don't hurt any one only for blood
I don't see y people can't except the fact that vampires
are not any thing u worship but things
u believe in and y can't one take me away?
Vampires are awesome but misunderstood
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Rogue98 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student
No offence but it sounds like you just want people to feel sorry for you
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everyonewearsamask Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Dude, your spelling is awful. I totally agree wit what you are saying, but why would you write "literature" and not spell words out all the way?
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DeridingPolyphemus Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
yea ive never undrstood y vampyres r something u worship
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KJID Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
meeeeeeee toooooooooo so true
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kazia202 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
I agree strongly with Reddrop in this case they can be rather pleasant and lovable creatures (i should know) rather than demons from hell as they are often called by priests and such.
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Redropp Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Very good and valid points. Vampires really aren't all that bad, there not even 'of the devil' like so many ignorant people think. They are just like you and me with some key differences.
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lalalaImAWESOME Featured By Owner May 25, 2011
thats good!
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Kyoridojin Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011
Only emoticons... :iconblushplz: :iconicamespeechlesslyplz: :iconbunnyloveplz: :iconikissitplz:
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scampi03 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
I so wish some vampire would take me away and turn me...hehe
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i wish my vampire would take me away.
its like they understand you more than anyone in the world about wanting to be free.
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love-the-vamps Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
I love it and I'm all 4 the take me away thing!
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Dream-maker101 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
your writing is so smooth and flowy, I am in awe of you.....love your work.....
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cadrack Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008   Writer
I agree! Vampires are just as human (sort of) as you and me.

I know what you mean, “y can't one take me away?” :cry:
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twistedwispers Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
iso totally agree :)
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner May 6, 2008   Writer
thanks
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twistedwispers Featured By Owner May 6, 2008
your welcome
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drakesangel Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
I love vampires and I like this poetry :heart:
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008   Writer
thanks I really like writing bout vampires and wolves/werewolves so it gets better everytime.
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Smiling-Vixen Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008  Hobbyist
AMEN!!
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008   Writer
thank you
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Smiling-Vixen Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008  Hobbyist
your welcome
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itachiheartextreme Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2008
i bet this is how yuuki in vampire knight would feel :D
nice expressive words :D
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008   Writer
thank you it is kinda how I feel so I guess I am kinda like yuki in a way
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TheUnorthadox Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
Agreed! Some people get worked up over the stupidest things =p..
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007   Writer
I know a lot of people do I don't understand y though
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TheUnorthadox Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
Hm, true =[
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007   Writer
yea so how did u like my poem?
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TheUnorthadox Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
:nod:
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Intheshadows13234 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007   Writer
thnks
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